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Wednesday, December 29, 2004

Metaphorical Madness!!!

Can some blessed being please tell me what i should name this piece?

Pixies and pygmies
metaphors and similes
black orange sunrise
marred grey leaves

perhaps it was time to say goodbye
shedding mercury tears
but it wasnt me
that was supposed to cry

zeolots pledge
infedility trusts
in my marrow
wisps of rust

im not high
why am i walking on air?
come on out now, self
i know you're there

hairy baldness
on my head
writing it all down
what was that thing i said?

about morning glories
enjoying carnal nights
shivering with lust
their cleansing rites

cracked blankets of autumn
covering smoothed out land
kneeling grey ditches
trying to stand

forests aflame
in the cool nights air
burnt out heart
cower in your lair

trying to make sense
of what you see around
moisture in the dust
sky in the ground

amongst metaphors
and similes
orange black sunsets
marred grey leaves

1 of them wept:

rooosh said...

itz soo good....u rockS!!!
tc n byE

Happy New Year!