All I see of you
are the standard characters
on a standard electronic screeen
Yet why is it
That the combination of
certain punctuation marks
has such an influence upon me
when they are sent by you
What world is this where it take but
an colon and opening parenthesis to whither
and the same but closing one to bloom?
Why is it that they seem to say more
then many a smile and tear presented before me
so intense and immediate and accessable
yet so hollow when compared
to your beautiful face decorated by
your beautiful, broken eyes?
And when we talk, so far now in-between
talks of casual thises-and-thats
that hide the phrase you-matter-always
We both see behind the veil
of our mutual nonchalance
hellos that mean finally-you're-here
goodbyes that scream please-don't-go
all in these characters
that everyone else uses
on this screen anyone can look at
It forms some special kind of life
when we speak.
Scattered
4 months ago

14 of them wept:
You should write more!
<3
This made me cry. I loved it.
Muahz ... :*
Beautiful <3
i am officially in love with your blog!
Sentimentally lovely.
Really good.
I'm following u.
Write me 1 More ;)
kisses ! XD
Dude, you're ultra depressivo and gay.
Hey dear! am a blogger from Pakistan. Honestly just browsing through good blogs to find smart writers like you to befriend. Nice blog outlook and interesting write-ups. I write on relationships mostly as well as some funny stuff.
I hope u can be a follower if u like my blog? Don’t forget to comment please !!
The Emotional Lava
Best of Luck for ur blogging.
We would like to thank you yet again for the lovely post you gave
i started crying crying by reading this
oh what a story i love it so nice
Indeed a love story ..huh !
I love the fluency.
I hardly know a guy who can
a) write like this
b) be as expressive as this, sentimentally.
You've done a wonderful job!
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