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Monday, May 09, 2005

Naivete

I finished it....

Here goes;

Naivete

Fire eyed and silky tongued
The devil mired the virgin
onto a boat named vanity
and promised to row her across
a decietful sea
encompassed within her own innocence
she agreed
for she knew that in her naivete
only disillusionment could break her
only reality could break her
and in her princepled world of make-believe
she was secure
so the devil rowed her across
that treacherous sea
every wave a mountain
every stroke a war
every smile a lie
in the middle of the jouney
out of sight of any land at all
the virgin's innocent smile
pinched the devil
and out poured his essence
not blood, but salted water
the same as the sea
and she tried to bale herself out
but found it somewhat hard to do
with one pair of hands to bale
and two leaking eyes
an ash-eyed rag-tongued carcass at her feet
and a confused pulsing mass in her mind
thus did sink a boat named vanity
and the virgin's essence became
the same as the sea
but she did not perish
nay, she lived on
and arived at her destination
the shore
fire eyed and silky tongued

2 of them wept:

Sadaff said...

You write brilliant.
whats the urdu expession:
daer aaye darust aaye!
meanin was waiting for the complete version.

I like the structure and the content of it and the 1st two lines are just brilliant sir.

Pixie said...

okay u finished it:P

man u answer requests fast.

it would require a little polishing..i just skimmed. im skimming through everything abhee