Coming Back to Life

I'm free.
So fucking free.
yay.

lol.

Exams are finally over, my presentation finished! Just bme hanging around oing jack shit from now until eternity...or at least until the end of the month.

Life is prety good right now... seems to be on a posative note overall. I've finally started working on something... if anyone could help me out with it (or even tell me that it sucks) I would really apprieciatew it.

Naivete

Fire eyed and silky tongued
The devil mired the virgin
onto a boat named vanity
and promised to row her across
a decietful sea
encompassed within her own innocence
she agreed
for she knew that in her naivete
only disillusionment could break her
only reality could break her
and in her princepled world of make-believe
she was secure
so the devil rowed her across
that treacherous sea
every wave a mountain
every stroke a war
every smile a lie
in the middle of the jouney
out of sight of any land at all
the virgin's innocent smile
pinched the devil
and out poured his essence
not blood, but salted water
the same as the sea
and she tried to bale herself out
but found it somewhat hard to do
with one pair of hands to bale
and two leaking eyes
an ash-eyed rag-tongued carcass at her feet
and a confused pulsing mass in her mind

-to be completed-

any ideas?