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Saturday, March 21, 2009

Painting Dreams with Lightening

Memories of the past
Seem to sneak up on me
With the subtlety
Of the very first raindrop
To hit your eye
before it rains
And with all the gravity
Of lightening flashing
Flickering
On a pitch black night
Putting for miliseconds
Into sharp relief
All the dreams I dreamed

The crash of thunder
Is like an audience applauding
A specifially excellent scene
In a tragic, comic, cynical
play

3 of them wept:

Poe said...

I like the quiet pensiveness. It's very...soothing. And that last line reminded me of Extreme. Tragic Comic, you've heard? Good song, 'tis. *nods knowledgeably*

Poe said...

Incidentally, you haven't commented in FOREVER. I feel so attention deprived. *pouts*

Ubaid said...

i like... !!